I am a student at Wigram Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 10 December 2018
summer learning journey lesson 5
This week we had to make a post about a country we chose and chose 2 famous places with 1 fact.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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hey amber its me again and i love your post but next time maybe you could correct one of your slides bye
ReplyDeleteHey Amber,
ReplyDeleteIt´s Amelia I really like how you put pictures in your work and that showed the readers what it looks like or what it is. Next time you should introduce what country you did and write a little more of an explanation at the bottom. You should also put a conclusion page to your slide so the reader knows that it is the end of your work. Other than that I really love your work!!!
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Thanks amelia
ReplyDeletenext time I will do all of that thanks for the comment.