The Olympic final
There I was in the blue shiny bus heading to the Olympics for my final gumboot
throw. I was so nervous. When I arrived I went to the competitors room.
I took out my new pink sparkly gumboot. A few minutes later I heard my name
getting called out “ Amber please come to the platform at once”. As I slowly
walked to the platform, I heard people’s flashing of their phones, and people
whispering about my gumboot. I stepped onto the platform I heard the
buzzerding, I threw my gumboot behind my head and swung with all my might
across and heard it swish across the room landing on the best mark.
Everyone cheered loud like a lion. I had just won the furthest gumboot throw
award and trophy. I went to claim my prize. On the way home I went in a shiny
new limo. I looked at my golden trophy with a happy grin on my face. When
I got home I showed my mom and went to bed, because it was 11:00
throw. I was so nervous. When I arrived I went to the competitors room.
I took out my new pink sparkly gumboot. A few minutes later I heard my name
getting called out “ Amber please come to the platform at once”. As I slowly
walked to the platform, I heard people’s flashing of their phones, and people
whispering about my gumboot. I stepped onto the platform I heard the
buzzerding, I threw my gumboot behind my head and swung with all my might
across and heard it swish across the room landing on the best mark.
Everyone cheered loud like a lion. I had just won the furthest gumboot throw
award and trophy. I went to claim my prize. On the way home I went in a shiny
new limo. I looked at my golden trophy with a happy grin on my face. When
I got home I showed my mom and went to bed, because it was 11:00
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