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Monday, 12 November 2018

my amazing fireworks writing.

Fireworks

I strongly think that fireworks should be sold in shops , if they are set anywhere they  
need a few seconds countdown before they set off, or if they set of straight away or someone's
face could get hurt.
I feel this way because fireworks are really fun for kids to watch , but they need to be careful,
like standing 15-20 steps away, or standing behind an adult.

New Zealand is a free country so we should allow fireworks to be sold in shops but if they getting set off
need to have a countdown so people should be able to get away quick .People should have to be over 18
to be able to set of fireworks.

New Zealand does not need to have fireworks on a British event day like Guy Fawkes Day.
They should have it on new years eve because lots of families get together for christmas and if it is
on new years eve lots of families can go together.

Only people who are stupid using fireworks get hurt.  
For example if someone taped lots of fireworks together and lit it in could make and explosion
, and it might injure someone really bad.

So , from all of these obvious and clear reasons, I strongly feel that fireworks should be sold in shops
but people need to be really careful when they light them.

By Amber

1 comment:

  1. I ♡ your work Amber! I do agree with you... Not to much, But sill...
    I do think that you could... I dont know you can do to make it better. Its so good I dont know you can do to make it better...

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