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Thursday, 19 December 2019

Week 1 day 5 activity 2

Hey guys
I had to retell the story of Yusra Mardini
Here is my work enjoy.
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Yusra Mardini
Yursa and her older sister fled the syrain war and set off on an
adventure to find safety in Europe. In summer 2015,
Yursa and her sister travelled through Lebanon to Turkey
then leaving for Greece in a small dinghy crowded with lots of
people. After 15 minutes in the sea crossing, the boat’s engine stopped. As a professional swimmer, Yusra was determined not to let any of her passengers drown. Yusra, her sister and two others people jumped into the wavy ocean and swam for three and a half hours in the water to stop their dinghy going down, they saved 20 people from drowning.

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Amber,

    This is a great little summary of Yusra Mardini's story, however, I've noticed that quite a bit of it has been copy and pasted directly from the internet. It's absolutely fine for you to use the internet to help you with the activities but we ask that you put any information you use into your own words before you share it on your blog. To earn the full number of points please go back and re-word this post.

    Thanks Amber! :)

    Blog ya later!

    Mikey

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  2. Kia Ora Mikey
    Thank you for telling me that I will do..... 1hourlater..... All done! Is that better? I tried:( :) THanks for commenting.
    Please tell Emma that I asked when the summer learning journey ended. Please let me know...
    BYE AMBER

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    1. Hi Amber!

      Thank you for making those changes. I know it can be tricky to re-word information that you've found on the internet - it's usually written so well - but it's awesome that you've edit it so that it's now your own work. :)

      Good question! The Summer Learning Journey finishes next Friday (January 24th) so you've still got plenty of time to complete and post any activities you haven't done yet. We'd love to see you get through the whole programme so keep up the great work! :)

      Bye for now,

      Mikey

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