I had to write a poem about if I was Neil Armstrong and I was the first man in history to put my foot on the moon.
If you were Neil Armstrong how would you feel? Please comment and assure my question.
Thursday, 19 December 2019
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Hi Amber this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani in Auckland and I'm commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Amber,
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on completing another activity! You've done so well to get through so many so quickly - well done! :)
Great poem, Amber! I like how you've made it rhyme. I think you've done well to capture how Neil Armstrong might have felt when he made it to the moon as well. If you were given the opportunity do you think you'd like to travel to the moon?
Have a wonderful afternoon and keep up the fantastic blogging! :)
Mā te wā,
Mikey