This week we have been learning to create a piece of persuasive writing. We had four topics to chose from. I chose Should kids get paid to go to school. Here is my work I hope you like it. Please comment your opinion should or shouldn't kids get paid to go to school?
Tuesday, 13 August 2019
Should kids get paid to go to school
Hi guys
This week we have been learning to create a piece of persuasive writing. We had four topics to chose from. I chose Should kids get paid to go to school. Here is my work I hope you like it. Please comment your opinion should or shouldn't kids get paid to go to school?
This week we have been learning to create a piece of persuasive writing. We had four topics to chose from. I chose Should kids get paid to go to school. Here is my work I hope you like it. Please comment your opinion should or shouldn't kids get paid to go to school?
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Amber its me your other half Liyah
ReplyDeletei love the way you put a cool background it makes the writing stand out.
maybe next you could put a different colour title or background because the are basically the same colour.
from your other half Liyah
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ReplyDeleteHi Amber. Its Kezia.
ReplyDeleteI'm here to tell you that..I disagree with your opinion. Kids should not get paid to go to school. In your first opinion you said that "kids do their hard work they don't get rewarded anything" Kids come to school to learn, get smarter. Not get paid! In your third opinion you said "If a kid gets paid $5 per good they do they could get rich" That's not a school. That's a place where kids get paid 24/7! School is a place where kids get a good education, and what if they are all ready rich? What if they don't donate to the poor? What is most of the children feel happy when the teachers say good work to them? In your second opinion you said that "If they get five kahu cards...." What if most of the kids don't even want Kahu cards?
And that's why i disagree with your Opinion. From Kezia