This week for writing we did a writing challenge about a picture taken from the cockpit of a plane.
we get points for each thing we add I got 59 points how many points do you think I got?
here is the points chart.
Points system:
You will be awarded 1 point each time you add;
- An interesting adjective (describing word)
- A correctly placed full stop at the end of a sentence
You will be awarded 2 points if you have;
- An opening paragraph that hooks the reader in
- A concluding paragraph that sums up what has been described
- A new paragraph for something you are describing
You will be awarded 5 points each time you add;
- A simile
- A metaphor
- Alliteration over 3 words long (eg lovely, luscious, lemon)
You will be given bonus points for style and adding in how cool I am without disrupting the flow of the story.` I hope you like my work@*@
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