I am a student at Wigram Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 14 June 2018
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Amber,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you put more than just one or two types of bears. Next time I think you could read over it and know where your capitals and other punctuation should go. This reminds me of the time that I wrote a information report on polar bears.
- Amelia