Thursday, 10 May 2018
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omg chloe is so cute you have done amazing work
ReplyDeleteletitia-ann you need to put describeing words in your comment and tell me what I need to work on OK!!!. :(
ReplyDeleteI am not trying to be mean:)
ReplyDeleteHi Amber its me Isla I really loved the part where Chloe finds her friends again and manages to get back home. Maybe next time you could make it into a game so people can download it onto the app store. How long did it take you to make your pick a path story?
ReplyDeletecute!!!!!!!!!! I love the name. I love the way you have done you story. but can you make it a bit longer? but I sill love your work!
ReplyDeletei love it because you get to choose two path ways and one way is the happiest way and one is the sadist way
ReplyDeletehi Isla I dont know how to make it into a game? it took me about 1 week
ReplyDeletethanks for commenting
Hey Amber it kaleb i really like your pick a path next time cane you do more ? aka sorry about my spelling
ReplyDeleteAmber I really loved your pick a path story. I think it is really cool. It looks like you must have put a lot of time and effort into it. I can't wait to see anymore of your amazing work on your blog!
ReplyDelete- Amelia
thanks everyone for commenting
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