hi this is my amazing story have a look
please comment
note: please don't do anything to cheers - Amber
I am a student at Wigram Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Wow Amber I really like the way you have started your story by taking us straight to the event. Well done!
ReplyDeletethanks for commenting :)
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