I have done a poem about mice.
what part did you like most?
I am a student at Wigram Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Amber. Love your poem ... perhaps re-read the last line ... I think you could choose a better word here ... xxx Mummy. p. S I love the cute wee pictures.
ReplyDeletethank you I will to do that
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